Bully

Walking down the corridor, he didn't dare to lift his head up? Why? 
What was that thing which didn't let him enjoy his High school? 
Voices in his mind didn't allow him to sink into slumber. So far in his life, it was his pillow who was always been friendly towards him. 
It was always his pillow, why it was not any human?
It was late at night until he reached his home.

"Where were you?", Ben's mom screeched as he opened the door. Ignoring her, he went upstairs to his room, locked himself inside, threw his bag on the bed, and rested on the floor, tears falling from his closed eyes. Next moment, he stood up and  locked himself inside. Feeling unworthy and thinking that he is good for nothing he took out a rope and placed the chair under the fan, in the center of the room. 
He climbed the chair, fixed the rope on the fan to hang himself and end his entire life story.

His High school days flashed before his eyes, how he was always a subject of ridicule. He couldn't forget the day he was locked in the loo for hours and the day when he was forced to drink Alcohol. He was the favourite game of most of the guys, known as "Beating Ben."

One thing that was unforgivable and unforgettable was when those guys made him stand naked on a mountain in the cold winds of winter. His patience was dead when entire school laughed at him.
He took a deep breath and surrounded his neck with the rope and kicked the chair.
 

Next moment, he opened his eyes and found himself lying still on the floor. He woke up it was morning already. It was the exact time to be off to school and to get bullied or be a game called "Beating Ben". He stood up and looked at his reflection on the mirror and noticed the anger on his face as if he is going to knock everybody down. His eyes were gleaming, he was thinking to punish the people who made him suffer. 

Reviews

[Surya]

Bullying is not tolerated in any terms....You showed in it well here...I enjoyed it Farhan...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Surya

[Anjali]

I seriously don't have any words to say about this piece. You just left me speechless! I loved it so much! I know the feeling of bullying a little bit. It's hard, and you expressed It really well!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou Anjali..I'm glad you like it

[Wajiha Nayeem]

Farhaaaaaaan...complete it please.....i love this and then as i was reading i was like..''story hogya?"..

[Farhan Shaikh]

The end...thankyou wajiha..I'm glad you loved it

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahaha....always a pleasured dear..

[Zoya]

Nightmares when sleeping...This world, a nightmare itself for Ben. I strongly despise bullies. Good job!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Correct..thankyou zoe

[Zoya]

my pleasure

[Sofia]

Great message sent through this story. Loved it. Throwing light on such a serious thing is absolutely necessary. Thanx for sharing :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou for review

[wordman]

great story,i hope he went to school that morning and kicked the s**t out of him...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yes he did..thankyou so much for ur time

[Sira YR]

You know, there is an old saying, "What goes around, comes back around," and "the same people you meet going up the hill, you meet coming back down the hill," This story is so sad and im glad that he didn't kill himself but something tells me that this bully or these bullies pushed him a little bit too far. I agree with Ethan's review, in that you could cut things out and i think u could add a little more description to make it more dramatic but it's still good the way it is...it kinda reminded me of a show called 13 Reasons Why which i say you should definitely watch (PG 15 and up tho). Anyways im rambling again. Good Job, could use a little bit of work but good job all the same :).

[Farhan Shaikh]

I've already watched that show and i loved it...btw thankyou

[Sira YR]

you're very welcome, tho i cried in the end of it, it was so sad :'(...RIP Hannah Baker

[Farhan Shaikh]

Even i did, She was lovely...i love her character and Tony

[Sira YR]

Me too...but i hate bryce and marcus and courtney and tyler...and i feel bad for justin and jessica and alex and zack :'(

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yeah me too, but it's sad about alex..i was like 'what?'

[Mr.Writer]

First of all, darn you for the cliffhanger! :D
Second of all, I really enjoyed reading this story as it left different messages for the audience and also at how a bully can turn another into a bully from bullying him...
Well done Farhan, keep it up!

[Ethan]

Good job, the story itself is great. However, you seem to have a habit of using more sentences to convey meaning than necessary. For instance, "Pushing the door he entered. His mom welcomed him with a shout asking"Where were you?" Ignoring his mom, he went upstairs, threw his bag on the bed and rested on the floor, his closed eyes dropped a tear. Next moment, he stood up and locked himself inside." You could write this in two sentences as opposed to four.
"'Where were you?', Ben's mom screeched as he opened the door. Ignoring her, he went upstairs to his room, locked himself inside, threw his bag on the bed, and rested on the floor, tears falling from his closed eyes."
Now granted, it's lengthy, but you could cut things to make it work. Try not to be obvious when you reveal things to the reader. Other than that, this is a great story, and I enjoyed it a lot.Great job! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou ethan for hel and review..i will take care of it in my upcoming works

[Maria]

Very intense, and how you left it hanging once he came to terms with what he would do, and the only thing left was a plan to seek revenge upon those that had caused this anger and hurt.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yep...thanks so much for your time