I'll never give up

Even if my head starts bleeding,
Even if something comes across my leading.
I'll never give up.

Even when my eyes are shutting down,
Or if my head is without my crown.
I'll never give up.

Even if i lose the things around,

Or there's no one to save my background.

I'll never give up.

Until when i breathe my last,
I know hope dies but destiny doesn't.
I'll never give up.

Reviews

[Wajiha Nayeem]

a real motivation.....wonderful farhan...keep writing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou Wajiha

[Cara]

Even when my eyes are shutting down,
Or if my head is without my crown.
i loved it, never give up

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou cara

[Sofia]

It inspired me! I loved it. Well penned and the rhyming was also great. Thnx for sharing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you sofia

[Sofia]

Most welcome :)

[Najam Us Saher]

That's true hope dies but destiny doesn't. This poem shows your strength and courage you have gathered from your obstacles. Well done. This is truly encouraging and inspiring.

[Farhan Shaikh]

I'm glad you find it interesting saher☺

[Joey Nizz]

What a strong confident message, people should always keep their head up high and face everything that comes at them.
You displayed it in such a great way with your words.

Thank you for sharing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou for your kind words Joey ☺

[Joey Nizz]

You are most welcome ^^