You're more than my crush

I want you to know,

but i don't wanna tell.

it's you in my brain,

cause my heart tried to restrain.

As a stranger we met

but as friends we'll get closer.

once you come to know my feelings

Together we'll get older.

You're my queen you need no crown,

we can be the best in our town,

promise! I'll never let you down.

I don't know what your last name is,

but surely it will change.

i will love to see you blush.

when I'll say you're more than my crush.

Reviews

[Zoya]

Awwie...The last two lines are perfect. She'll surely blush when you say that. Nicely penned!

[Farhan Shaikh]

😁 thank you zoe..

[Zoya]

No worries

[Surya]

Haha....It bought me a smile...Such a cute love it is.....I loved it...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Hehe! Thanks buddy☺

[Maria]

Wow, this is so lovely. And so moving...Loved it

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you maria☺

[Maria]

You are welcomed.

[Najam Us Saher]

This poem brought a smile on my face...I loved the last stanza especially the lines
'I will love to see you blush
When I'll say you're more than my crush.'
This line shows your expectations. So sweet and heart touching write this will definately steal the heart of that girl...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Glad to read your kind review saher☺

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Nice poem. I really like the second stanza, it's really cute. All I have is one problem. In the first stanza, instead of writing 'because' you seen to have written 'coz'. You might even use cause, but 'coz' is completely texting language. Keep writing!

Love,
Vasilees.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much 😊

[Anjali]

Such an amazing poem! I really really loved it, especially, the 3rd paragraph, that's my fave one. It is an incredible poem! Keep writing!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much☺

[Anjali]

You are welcome!

[Cara]

once you come to know my feelings
Together we'll get older.
nice lines, and nice poam thank you for sharing

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for your review cara☺

[Priyanshi]

"i will love to see you blush.
when I'll say you're more than my crush."...beautiful lines, Farhan...
Keep on writing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou so much Priyanshi☺

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.