You're more than my crush

I want you to know,

but i don't wanna tell.

it's you in my brain,

cause my heart tried to restrain.

As a stranger we met

but as friends we'll get closer.

once you come to know my feelings

Together we'll get older.

You're my queen you need no crown,

we can be the best in our town,

promise! I'll never let you down.

I don't know what your last name is,

but surely it will change.

i will love to see you blush.

when I'll say you're more than my crush.

Reviews

[apennylate]

A simply put together piece of intricate emotion.... Well penned...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much

[Karisha Nove]

I just love it. This so beautiful. at first it look like a simple crush but than it look like more than a cursh

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou so much Karisha

[Vic]

this is a nice, innocent poem dreaming about a future with a (more than) crush you want to get to know better. thanks for sharing

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for reviewing

[Joey Nizz]

This is such a sweet beautiful piece of work Farhan!
I really liked the lines you have created with your choice of words.

Very well done indeed!

Thanks for sharing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much Joey☺

[Joey Nizz]

You are very much welcome Farhan :)

[Mr.Writer]

Lol, I really enjoyed this Farhan!
Very simple and sweet and beautiful!
Keep it up

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for the kind review ☺

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[Ethan]

Haha you could put his to music and make it a song if you really wanted.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Not a bad idea..😁 thanx for reviewing and suggesting..

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A telling and quite sweet piece that glides effortlessly well done, good read.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much 😊

[heartspeaks]

when i'll say (enter key)
YOUR'E MORE THAN MY CRUSH (bold and italics) put it in the last line as it is the tag line of your poem..

Well done Farhan...really a sweet work...it felt like a short movie in itself...😊 Looking forward for more...Keep writing

[heartspeaks]

and write BLUSH with either red or pink and entire last line in a particular colour

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for that i made the last line bold and italics that was a good idea...i didn't make the words colourful because i don't like to write in colouring words..don't get me wrong, your idea was good..and thanks for the kind review

[heartspeaks]

your welcome

[zaisham9393]

Perfect words to show how much you love her :)...
THank you for sharing :)!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much 😊

[wordman]

sweet thoughts of love,now you just need to tell her how you feel

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yeah i should..thank you Mr.wordman☺