You're more than my crush

I want you to know,

but i don't wanna tell.

it's you in my brain,

cause my heart tried to restrain.

As a stranger we met

but as friends we'll get closer.

once you come to know my feelings

Together we'll get older.

You're my queen you need no crown,

we can be the best in our town,

promise! I'll never let you down.

I don't know what your last name is,

but surely it will change.

i will love to see you blush.

when I'll say you're more than my crush.

Reviews

[Damien Ridge]

I remember having a bad crush. Been with someone a while now and happy so it doesn't happen anymore. But you captured what it feels like pretty good. Glad to have read your writing, thank you for sharing!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou Damien☺

[rowan.taylorrr]

this is sweet. I like it much

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou so much XOxo

[Hope]

A sweet poem Farhan:)
Loved it.
Also the way you wrote is great!
Thanks for sharing!!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou so much neetha

[Enchanted-Raven]

Beautiful words, well penned, enjoyed :) x

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much 😊

[Pravir]

Very well written and expressed poem . . . i liked the rhyme which gave a charm to ur work . loved it

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Pravir ☺

[pia]

Lol this is sooo mee !!! I can relate. Good stuff farhan!!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much Pia☺

[SoulShatter]

Oh man! Why does this remind me of myself? And I love how nicely and smoothly you wrote this poet.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Haha! Thank you☺

[John F Carver]

Having a crush on such an entity of one's imagination is to love no one. Don't pursue her too long. You obviously don't know her so don't ever give her a name or any credence. She will destroy your mind. Some things imagined are best left imaginary and not considered even as characters like Satan's passion for himself destroyed the conceited fellow. Conceit too is caused by believing something best left in the imagination wherein it was born. All men like devils know defeat with the cause of it belief in the highly unlikely possibility there is any truth to that they image of themselves or others.

The point of view you wrote this in is dangerous. Consider using the point of view of another to keep it fiction at all times. Always, and I mean in all ways too; protect your mind.

[Farhan Shaikh]

It's true that something should be left nothing more but imagination, correct i agree with that part of your review and apart from that I'll say everyone has their own point of view, it doesn't mean you're wrong..you're not wrong but we have different understandings..by the way thank you for your advise i know at some point in my life i may need use of it..☺

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this because i have always thought that the friendship was the most important part of a relationship...even a romantic one...the physical is important and good...really being there for each other to lean on...most important.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Absolutely, friendship is indeed an important part of relationship☺ thank you!

[Tabby Mac]

What a beautiful dance of words! I enjoyed this piece of yours!
Tabby

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much 😊