You're more than my crush

I want you to know,

but i don't wanna tell.

it's you in my brain,

cause my heart tried to restrain.

As a stranger we met

but as friends we'll get closer.

once you come to know my feelings

Together we'll get older.

You're my queen you need no crown,

we can be the best in our town,

promise! I'll never let you down.

I don't know what your last name is,

but surely it will change.

i will love to see you blush.

when I'll say you're more than my crush.

Reviews

[richieb]

Nice flowing love poem. I like the style you wrote this for this piece. We are all captured by our feelings for someone. The most tender are those in the beginning. Your poem tells all this in your unique voice.
Blessings,
Richie b.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sweet, kind and wonderful words for love. The complete poem was perfect and amazing. Thank you Farhan for sharing the outstanding poetry for the hope of love.
Coyote

[LKBillips]

Love a good crush. Nicely written. Keep it up!

[Haniya]

It's so cute.I love it, man!

[Stacey]

This is really lovely. I love it!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou Stacey😃

[cold_hearted77]

This is amazing i like it!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou 😊

[Gwenn the little girl]

While I was reading this poem I was all laughs and smiles! Your poem is just so childishly cute and it reminds me of a young schoolboy writing a poem to his crush, ah pardon, love and to declare to the world that she is his future! It is innocently cute as it is cheeky!

I like to read more poems from you in the future! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much...your words means a lot to me..

[Donicca Dona L]

ahh the ending part genius haha .

[Farhan Shaikh]

Haha...thankyou

[AcasualPawn]

Nice poem, sounds like fantasy for me...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thnx buddy...why fantasy?

[AcasualPawn]

Iam alone my friend

[AcasualPawn]

And iam fake.. Everything about me herw is fake...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Don't Worry...even Batman is alone

[AcasualPawn]

And iam not batman fan.... I like joker more than him

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hahahha...tht's soo cute and nice and lovely...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou so much Wajiha