Misunderstood..

His world has been

destroyed,

people around were

annoyed.

His terror made him

cruel,

His igniting heart got

fuel.

As a betrayer he

stood,

nothing he was, but only

misunderstood.

His world was ending with

hatred,

still for the right moment

he waited.

His hope was as strong

as stone,

At last he ended up

Alone.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

When we allow anger and regret to control us. We can end-up alone. Thank you Farhan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[matrixmark]

Rollercoaster feelings of abandonment, hope, bravery and sadness all rushed through my mind as I read this. A VERY touching poem indeed. I only wish I could do poetry but I never will be able too. To put all these feelings into such a short piece takes some skill.

Great job.

Mark.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much mark☺
Good to see you back☺

[matrixmark]

Not a problem. Always a pleasure to read quality work. And its so nice that people have been so understanding with my lack of activity. I am having a few days of rest now. So i should be able to review some more.

Mark.

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's good to know☺

[Karisha Nove]

This poem feels somehow sad but I like it.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much 😊

[emipoemi]

Wow! This is very well written, so solemn, with superb musicality (third stanza gets wonky in the third line, but not too much), and you start with a bang and end with another bang. Well done!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much 😊

[heartspeaks]

wow.. deep. You are improving amazingly, Strong emotion. Poetically beautiful and really connects... So good, Keep it up . Great work

[mou]

yes I too sometime feel that we get misunderstood only under two situations: either we give something so much value that seems to be extravagant (unfortunately) to that one or select a wrong mile stone to measure the remaining distance that need to be covered..very emotional and practical write

[Farhan Shaikh]

Right Mou..thanks for stopping by

[Jessica Lima]

No! Awww that's such a sad ending. My heart just broke. I was kinda hoping for a turn around since this reminds me of myself a little bit. Never the less... great job.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou jessica☺

[Maria]

Very intriguing from the start. Loved this

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much 😊

[rowan.taylorrr]

wow i love this. so many images went through my head and i connected with the words, well done!!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you xoxo

[DanielaMorris]

Wow (: very nice, very deep poem

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Daniela..☺