Rollercoaster feelings of abandonment, hope, bravery and sadness all rushed through my mind as I read this. A VERY touching poem indeed. I only wish I could do poetry but I never will be able too. To put all these feelings into such a short piece takes some skill.
Not a problem. Always a pleasure to read quality work. And its so nice that people have been so unde.. read moreNot a problem. Always a pleasure to read quality work. And its so nice that people have been so understanding with my lack of activity. I am having a few days of rest now. So i should be able to review some more.
Wow! This is very well written, so solemn, with superb musicality (third stanza gets wonky in the third line, but not too much), and you start with a bang and end with another bang. Well done!
yes I too sometime feel that we get misunderstood only under two situations: either we give something so much value that seems to be extravagant (unfortunately) to that one or select a wrong mile stone to measure the remaining distance that need to be covered..very emotional and practical write
No! Awww that's such a sad ending. My heart just broke. I was kinda hoping for a turn around since this reminds me of myself a little bit. Never the less... great job.