She's the one

She's the one
who wakes me up early in the morning.
stands by my side when the sky is falling.

All she need is me,
all i need is her.
in the dark times she shines a light on
me.

She's the one,
who will never let me
down.
she made me her king without any crown.

She's the one,

who want to go left but she for me she is in right.

in all the hard times she is the leading

light.

She's the one,

i constantly dream

about.

she's the only girl i don't wanna live

without.

Author's Note

Just a poetry, nothing in this is attached with my personal life...

Reviews

[Sonakshi Arora]

I see this as an ode to your mommy! A beautiful poem :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you sonakshi..

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for love. I liked the hope and the flow of thoughts leading to perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much😉

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Shasha]

Nicely written, a great poem! Keep it up!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou shasha

[Shasha]

You're welcome!

[Fahmida Mehreen]

Honest expression for true unconditional love. Simple confession. I wish it was all so simple till the end.

Good work. :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much Fahmida😊

[Haniya]

Good job man, you did great!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much hanu

[Raj Sahu]

I really enjoyed while reading this amazing poetry. Well done Farhan. Keep writing. 😊

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you raj..

[Tabby Mac]

There is a bit of touch ups I would do...but that being said I love this piece! Well written! Even though you say it's not from the heart it's heartfelt!! A few capitalization issues and a few words need to be tweaked.
Like need to needs
"She's the one I constantly dream about"
Otherwise well done!!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks for this...and thanks for your constructive review☺

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I agree with Anastasia over the tenses bit but overall a nice emotional write. Nice effort, Farhan.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much Yumna..☺
Yea i should be careful about tenses in ny further works..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Farhan :)

[Stacy Purvis]

This is a very lovely read. The tense is a bit confusing, however. It seems to jump back and forth between past and present.
I enjoyed the premise of this piece.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank
You so much 😊

[shyla]

I wish guys would talk about me like that what amazing ! And an abundance of perfect wording! It is an extravagant poem :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

One day someone will do that for sure..btw thank you for your kind review..