He Wasn't..

Those wrong choices that he made,

those words that he

said.

those messes he created,

he wasn't a bad,

just far beyond from your understanding.

Those paths which he crossed,

many times he was lost.

all those things fate had cost.

he wasn't afraid,

but brave enough to face these holocaust.

Held his anger in his fist,

felt he shouldn't

exist,

in all those moments he persist.

he wasn't a fool,

he was building himself, to count himself seven billions minus one.

Reviews

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very good poem. Enjoyed the read. Good job :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Lauren☺

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

You're welcome :)

[Shasha]

It's pretty deep! An amazing poem, with wonderful words! Thank you for sharing! Keep them coming!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Welcome! And thank you for your kind review

[Mel Jayne]

i really like this but I think that at times it does not make great sense, as in, those mess should be that mess or those messes. shouldn't have exist should be shouldn't have existed or shouldn't exist. just some reccomendations, it's very good though and quite mysterious.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much, I'll make the changes..

[Monica]

Way better than mine :P Lovely work.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Monica☺

[Pravir]

Heart felt lines . . . . . loved to read . . . keep sharing

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[Anjali]

So beautiful! I also feel like this as well sometimes, that no one understands me and it just feels so so bad. And you have explained your thoughts really well. It's amazing!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yeah! Thank you anjali

[Anjali]

You're welcome!

[Joey Nizz]

This is deep and great, I really enjoyed reading it till the very end.

Thanks for sharing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Welcome! And thank you for your kind review..

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome, keep writing!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yep, i will

[Priyanshi]

A wonderful poem... He wasn't bad, but no-one understood him, instead he was mistaken.
"He was building himself, to count himself seven billions minus one." was the best line,I loved it .

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you priyanshi for your kind review

[Priyanshi]

You're welcome.

[wordman]

a poet that no one understands,would be a closed book

[Farhan Shaikh]

Absolutely right..

[Surya]

It's deep Farhan...but none understands a honest and a perfect person....I liked it...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yeah surya! Thanks so much 😊