He Wasn't..

Those wrong choices that he made,

those words that he

said.

those messes he created,

he wasn't a bad,

just far beyond from your understanding.

Those paths which he crossed,

many times he was lost.

all those things fate had cost.

he wasn't afraid,

but brave enough to face these holocaust.

Held his anger in his fist,

felt he shouldn't

exist,

in all those moments he persist.

he wasn't a fool,

he was building himself, to count himself seven billions minus one.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. Sometimes better to walk a private path. See the world with real vision. I liked the ending a lot. Thank you Farhan for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Harley Quinn]

I enjoyed reading this. Very creative. Great use of words.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much 👼

[Avinash]

Very strong work which gives a peek to readers to your inner state. This is a privilege of a writer to speak the unspeakable. Do use it wisely.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Sure...thanks for stopping by

[CAPOLAVORO]

Of course the He wasn't in there means a lot of things. This one is so good that it made me imagined of many He that I have encountered who struggles, fall yet able to survive. Nice poem.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much 😊

[Abhishek Asthana]

imparted a great message... really good work... keep it up !!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much abhishek

[Haniya]

Very powerful poem, I think you do a great job expressing the theme of bravery and love in your works. I love it,man, keep it up!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you hanu..

[Fahmida Mehreen]

"he was building himself, to count himself seven billions minus one."

This verse overtops it all. Empowerment lies within. The best way of survival is self acknowledgement. Inability to do so shall only open doors to disappointments and agony.

Good piece.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou so much😊

[mou]

when we make a wrong choice people put the fingers across that one not to the wrong object...so strange but quite true..and your write is full of inspiration...specially love the line "seven billions minus one"...beautiful

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much☺

[Sofia]

A beautiful and wonderful write! Enjoyed it very much. The lines were so deep.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much Sofia ☺

[Sofia]

You're welcome :)

[richieb]

Enjoyed your poem. Deep message of learning and persistence.
Richie b.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much richie☺