Tomorrow Will Be Kinder

Your struggles are
your reminder,
tomorrow will
be kinder.
in your darkest times,
you'll shine brighter.
you are your fate's designer,
your obstacles are like
a glider,
tomorrow will be
kinder.
you are the lonely
fighter,
no matter if you feel extinguished,
one day you'll be
shiner,
tomorrow will be
kinder.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

From a writer who struggles with mental illness, depression, anxiety, etc, this poem was the most powerful to read! My dad always tells me to take life "one day at a time," and reading this piece really related to that, I feel. I admire how empowering this simple message is, yet if one reads it everyday or at least keeps it in mind, it can speak volumes. This certainly brought a powerful smile to my face, thank you so much!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou, these words means a lot☺

[Haniya]

This poem gives the audience an abundance of hope and makes them feel better. I love how you use great powerful words, it just makes me feel so amazing inside. Excellent job!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you hanu so much

[Fahmida Mehreen]

A very optimistic piece of work. :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much 😊

[prachi prangya agasti]

The rhyming in the poem is nice, a pleasant read...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you 😊

[Jessica Lima]

I like the flow and body of the poem. I can be so picky but this truly made me smile and gave me hope. I guess I needed to hear some encouraging words. The rhyming scheme it very well done. :) Thanks for sharing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

And thanks for your kind review

[Surya]

That's how life is..A good message Farhan..:)..
I loved it..:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you surya

[Anjali]

Amazing message! It's really empowering and your words are so thoughtful. A beautiful poem, indeed!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Anjali

[Anjali]

You're welcome

[Luna]

Nicely done and good advice "tomorrow will be kinder" . Next time I get stuck somewhere I'll keep that in mind ;)

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's nice Luna, thanks so much

[apennylate]

I wish to use my troubles as mere gliders... Hopefully the thought of tomorrow will be kinder... Well penned...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you...

[apennylate]

You are welcome

[CAPOLAVORO]

Thank you for sharing these words Farhan. There is always another day which we called "Tomorrow". Saying it will be kinder is a good way of opening minds into positivism and hearts to healing. Well done.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Your welcome capolavoro

[Joey Nizz]

Nice rhymes, this message gave me the inspiration for today, thank you!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Your welcome☺