A Way To Destination..

Ain't anything

I'm afraid of,

I'm gonna boost myself so

gear up.

ain't anything can set me off,

if there's such so

back off.

right from the bottom I'll rise,

shine brighter than the sky lights.

I'm going straight to destination,

I'll go alone on my mission.

I'm gonna fly up higher,

place where the moon looks brighter.

my life is going to be greater,

I will be my path's creator.

one day you'll see me across the world.

I put my legs on life's accelerator.

I'll give credits to my educators,

your jinxes won't work now, haters.

Reviews

[Karisha Nove]

This Poem give a feeling like I don't care what other think I won't give up on my ways. I love it... This is inspiring...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Karisha☺

[Arman]

Woah! This is one your best I've read so far

[mou]

it is really inspiring..sometime the long frustrated journey of life make us forget to rise..but there is always a bright dawn is waiting if we can cross the previous little darkest night..beautiful write

[Farhan Shaikh]

Right...thanks very much

[Red Rose]

Damn Farhan! You've grown and improved so much! I'm back after a long time and I can easily notice this new sense of maturity in your poem.
I'm really happy for you :)
I love the third paragraph. It has a nice rhythm to it.
Do write more, my friend..

[Farhan Shaikh]

It's really good to see you back Red Rose, and thank you for your kind review..looking forward to read your works..

[CAPOLAVORO]

I always like this kind of poem. So 21st century. The rhythm, the tone, the imagery, the words. Cool and real. :) Nice!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[Surya]

Haha, you hit me with this...
I enjoyed it...
Feel sorrow for the lose, that's an emotion enjoy it, then realise, then wake up...and start a marathon again...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Haha! Yep..thank you Surya

[Mel Jayne]

Cool poem, was some of it not supposed to make sense? 'Aint anything I fear of.' is an interesting choice of words. shouldn't it be 'aint nothing i'm afraid off.' or maybe you are writing in a coloquial voice or something and I'm not saying it with the right accent.
Haters was also an interesting choice of words, I asocciate it with anon hate on social media and to a greater extent petty children. A more mature version of this might be 'swearing at those who put me down.' or something. i hope that makes sense. It's a really cool poem though!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Mel Jayne..
Actually that last line was making a good rhyme so that's why I thought it would be perfect...you are right by the way and yes's, I should make the the first line
"Ain't anything I'm afraid of"
And Thankyou for your kind words, help and review😊

[Wajiha Nayeem]

woah woah woah!
wonderful and energetic!i loved each line of this poem and it gave positive vibes to me....
crazzy one manh..keep it up!
good going farhan!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you wajiha...that's really kind

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"right from the bottom I'll rise,
shine brighter than the sky lights."

That should be the spirit! A great positive write. I enjoyed reading this. The last line made me laugh :p

[Island Hippy]

Aloha Farhan, very positive vibe with great energy throughout. Refreshing. Izzy

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much 😊

[Island Hippy]

You're welcome