He will keep running

Tying up his shoes,

none of cheers, loads of boos,

he is on the mark,

set to go,

he wanna keep running,

neither rain can stop him,nor snow.

Harshness all around the world,

living in peace included in his dream world.

running far away from them,

loads of things which he wanna run away from.

they don't help each other,

they don't care about their brother.

they crush each other,

he wanna keep running from this pother.

boosting himself,

he is not gonna stop,

living here ain't nothing more than a jumping from roof top.

he is still running,

he ain't gonna get flop.

He will keep running

Reviews

[Priyanshi]

Good poem , stating that he wanna run and run but nothing wouldn't stop him , maybe it's rain or snow or anything .... enjoyed it .

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yep, thank you priyanshi

[Priyanshi]

You're welcome

[Hope]

Sometimes change is good...
Enjoyed your poem...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanks so much 😊

[richieb]

I like the poem, it speaks of perseverence and fortitude. We all need inspiration to climb barriers and overcome obstacles. May your poem be an inspiration to others.
Peace,
Richie b.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanl you richie...

[CAPOLAVORO]

I think of Jesse Owens when reading this one. Nice poem. Keep writing. :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank
You..

[Jessica Lima]

I liked the first two stanzas but the rest needs a bit of work. Al in all, I love the message. Good work.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you. 😊

[Surya]

If you have willpower you can chase,
If you are dreamer it's possible you can do it...
If you need it badly you will get it...:)
That's cool..I enjoyed it..:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you surya

[Wajiha Nayeem]

While i was reading this poem i had this sort of confidence and jazba in me!
this poem was an amazing poem and i felt a crave to read this poem again and again!
wonderful work farhan!

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's so kind ..thank you wajiha

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure farhan!

[Mr.Writer]

This is so good! Seriously Farhan, it's like you boosted the readers energy. You didn't let the character give up, he just kept on going no matter what obstacles he faced. Amazing!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yep Shaan, thank you

[Zoya]

Nice message here. Keep running no matter what happens. This poem flowed well and had a nice pace I'd say. Well done!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you zoe

[Zoya]

No problem

[Tazeen Ahmed]

This somewhere ignites hope to keep going despite the obstacles that venture your path.
Wonderful!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you tazeen😊