I Said To Her..

I Said girl,

Please don't let my love go in vain. Let me love you again, It's only you in my heart & brain.

I Said girl,

You're the only one I love, Never put anyone above, It is lovely thing to fall in love.

I Said girl,

Can you please erase my mistakes, Celebrate my birthday together Holding my hand and cutting my cake.

I Said girl,

I really really miss you a lot, I think about you at every plot, You asked me to forgive you! But No! I cannot.

I Said girl,

Surely I deserve a second chance, Once again to hold your waist and dance, I'm gonna take you to a date in France.

I Said girl,

It was my past & I ask you to forgive, take me in your heart where I'll live, I was a fool so please forgive.

I Said girl,

I'm sorry I misunderstood you, I really should've taken care of you, You still love me?, please give me a clue.

I Said girl,

I really miss your smile at me, I really want you to ride for life with me, I can be we and now I'm on my knee.

I Said girl,

I don't know where you are but I hope we'll meet, because I really am missing our conversations and our tweet.

I Said girl,

I'm still in your love, and I'll never move on, it doesn't matter how far you have gone, I still believe that you'll take me in your arms again, and help recover my pain

Reviews

[Zoya]

Suh a heartfelt poem. I can feel it. Great work!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Zoe..

[G.C.... aka Gene]

tangible to composition and love been a fading art I say you done a fine encouragement to reader and writer.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[Writing Angel]

so sweet loving and so much yearning in your words.. great work!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you angel

[Mr.Writer]

Very romantic :) Beautiful... engaging... :)

[Mr.Writer]

Also "make me help recover from my pain"
The line's wording sounded a bit off, so I thought you can change it to this :)
"help me recover from my pain"

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much shaan

[Mr.Writer]

No problem! :))

[Najam Us Saher]

This poem clearly shows what you still feel about her. Every emotion you expressed I feel came from depths of your heart. It was really heart touching poem. I liked this a lot. The repitition of the words I said girl is really very effective. Beautifully written.

[Farhan Shaikh]

😉😊your reviews are always kind ..

[Najam Us Saher]

My reviews depends on the poems...😀

[Surya]

Waah!!, Farhan, keeping words aside, your emotions and your sayings, requests are honest...one day I hope that to happen...
I loved your write...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much surya..