Agent of Chaos

Stuck with the monster,

Which lives inside me.

Sometimes I want it. though.

Sometimes I want to be free.

Putting step in the bliss,

Get caught and monster's kiss.

He snatched away my love,

He snatched away my reign.

It's hard to live while he lives,

Try and try but then forgive.

They are afraid when I'm around,

It's me who was let down.

Tearing my clothes he comes out,

Burying me inside he runs out.

He is the toughest obstacle.

And his chaos is unstoppable.

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

Reminds me of The Dark Knight when the Joker proclaimed, "I am an agent of Chaos." ;)

Attempting to conceal and completely control your inner darkness is a mistake. You need to let it out once in a while for a snack. If you don't, it might very well frenzy and cause more damage.

A very good musing on the theme of our inner darkness/demons. We all have them, waiting to be released...

Damn good work Farhan! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much lovecraft😊

[prachi prangya agasti]

inner Demons are something everyone has to battle with. The battle is choosing sides. A nice piece. Good job

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank youu so much for your kind review

[Writing Angel]

Wow... so much yearn to live but not being able to... we all have that side of us... very relatable I loved this

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for your time and kind review😊

[Valentine]

Either you rule it, or you let it rule you. It is always your choice. Valentine

[Farhan Shaikh]

Exactly, btw thank you

[Giulia King]

I think we all have demons and monsters living inside of us. This is a good poem! I feel like you can make it longer too :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

You ae right, btw thank you so much for ur time and review

[Najam Us Saher]

And his chaos is unstoppable. This line conveys it all. Very true and relatable. I hope the monster isn't your anger because anger can destroy lives. I liked the theme of this poem which reflects the human nature.

[Farhan Shaikh]

It is my anger saher, but I have sort of go with it my rest of life, because not everything is going to be good in human..thank you for your review.

[Najam Us Saher]

I have correctly guessed it then. Yes you are right no one is perfect. No need to mention thanks...I love reading your work.

[Zoya]

This is a worthwhile write. The "monster" that lives inside each human being is often the cause of their own destruction. Good job.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Zoe your review means alot to me.😊

[Zoya]

You are welcome!

[Surya]

A type of Hulk, reflection it seems, though a beautiful description of a beast in best....Good one Farhan...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yeah Surya thank you so much