I'm Sorry

An apologize for some mistakes I did in my past.

I was walking through the dark side. I forgot that the sunshine wants me beside itself. I never once thought that it needed me.


I was in the shed of the dark clouds which never showered any rain. I didn't realize about the deep wounds it carried within itself.


Even on the mountain of power, I was sinking more lower. I never realized that I was gaining hatred so fast. So here is my Apology for all the deeds I did in my past


An Apology to all those who loved me, I am Sorry for never being pleased with all of them. I know some will forget, but some will never forgive.


Sorry for all those mistakes I've made, Sorry for being so rude. An Apology I found necessary, this is my Apology which I must say.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

All of us will need to apology one day.
"Sorry for all those mistakes I've made, Sorry for being rude. An Apology I found necessary, An Apology I which is must"
I understand the lines above. Once I was a man with self-needs and today. I'm trying to be kind. Life is learning. Thank you Farhan for sharing the powerful poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for your kind review

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Farhan.

[Mr.Writer]

Beautiful... stunning... a great poem Wow... really keep it up. You really conveyed the message really well :) Keep it up! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you very much shaan

[MadWaffles]

Original, not to short, and I always enjoy a sincere apology. :]

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thankyou so much😊

[Njeri Brooks]

This was very interesting. Reading an apology letter isn't an everyday occurrence for me.

However, I can most definitely relate to the feeling of want to apologize and make things right. After all, guilt is a pretty healthy persuasion. Unfortunately, there are various people around the world who will choose to disregard an apology (myself included).

Critics:

1. "I never thought that it needed me once" should be "I never once thought it needed me."

2. "I was in the shed of the dark clouds which never showered its rain" should be written as "I was in the shed of the dark clouds, which never showered any rain."

~~N. Brooks

P.S. This was filled with great meaning, but Proof-reading is a great thing. You should become best friends with it in the future.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much for your kind visit

[Farhan Shaikh]

I've corrected the mistakes u suggested..

[Njeri Brooks]

Great!! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

[Valentine]

A place we all find ourselves as some points in our lives. I found telling God how sorry I was the hardest but most comforting. Valentine

[Farhan Shaikh]

Right, thank you so much

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Wow. This is very beautiful. I can relate on so many levels. Everybody has an apology for somebody in their life. Very good job.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much for your kind review

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Your welcome :)

[Lovecraft]

I enjoyed this poem, especially because its unique nature. Dark and provocative imagery and visuals. It comes off as sincerely apologetic and you seem to be holding up a mirror to yourself which most people are often afraid to do.

Very heartfelt poem, Farhan! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much your review means alot to me😊

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Wow! I completely like the way you have made comparisons here with a dark side and rain shadow!
Kudos!! One of your best works!
It would be "an apology".
Brilliant use of metaphors and imageries.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much tazeen..

[Manu]

This reminded me of one of my favourite Songs- Sorry, Blame it on me By Akon.
Most overused as well as underrated word I feel is I am sorry. You should say sorry only if you mean it otherwise it becomes meaningless.
Here, you realised your mistake so you feel it is necessary to say sorry for your deeds. It is a good thought. Nicely done.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much gorthi😊

[Najam Us Saher]

An apology becomes necessary when there is retrospection done and when one realises that he/she is wrong. Now and then at times there is a need to apologize and you have written this so beautifully which made me sink deep in thoughts thinking have I done any mistake recently which makes me necessary to apologise. I loved this line
I was in the shed of the dark clouds which never showers rain.
Not many of us realises the importance of accepting our mistake and moreover if one does not everyone have the courage to apologise. You have written a very touching poem I couldn't stop writing what all I feel about apology. Well done. ☺

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much saher..I'm glad u caught it correctly

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome :)