Dream Girl

Bit of romantic words

My Dream girl. I know we never met before, But everytime I see you, my heart falls on the floor.

My Dream girl. I know we never talked before, But every moves of your lips, makes heart beat faster though.

My Dream girl. There's nothing more beautiful than you, but everytime I think of you, my face put a smile in flow.

My Dream girl. My heart beats only for you, Even when we're apart, My hearts says endless I Love You.

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

A loving and tenderly written poem about the girl of your dreams, yo r true love, a soul mate. It's quite good, though there are a few grammatical errors in the second, third and fourth lines. Clean that up a bit and it would be even better.

I know that I can be critical in regards to your spelling/grammar, but I'm just trying to give some constructive criticism so this poem is easily understandable and more beautiful in its wording.

Good job though! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

thanx vfor your polite adice..i vwill vdefinately look into it..btw thak you so much for assesment...

[Surya]

Even my heart says endless "I love you"....haha .Thank you Farhan for sharing..:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

thnkss for yer visit..

[Jes' Pi]

The poem is romantic and you are good at describing!
Very good:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you atashusi😊

[Coyote Poetry]

Those dream girls can be dangerous. I liked the woman who can make me laugh and have long conversations. I liked the way you used the description. Thank you Farhan for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for your time

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[mercy party]

very charming your writings are. That being said, my friend, make this dream real, write this girl some poetry!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you mercy for your time and visit 😊

[Najam Us Saher]

So romantic. I liked the flow and soft and courteous tone of this poem.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you saher😊

[Najam Us Saher]

My pleasure :)

[Johnny Dep]

My dream girl I love you too...Its romantic Farhan.
Thank you for sharing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much johny dep😊