Dream Girl

Bit of romantic words

My Dream girl. I know we never met before, But everytime I see you, my heart falls on the floor.

My Dream girl. I know we never talked before, But every moves of your lips, makes heart beat faster though.

My Dream girl. There's nothing more beautiful than you, but everytime I think of you, my face put a smile in flow.

My Dream girl. My heart beats only for you, Even when we're apart, My hearts says endless I Love You.

Reviews

[Wajiha Nayeem]

that 's too nice and too sweet.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure

[Silmara McGarry]

Simply Beautiful!!!!
Well done from me :-)

All best,
Sil

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much

[richieb]

Farhan,
If you show the young ladies your poetry than I am sure you will your"Dream Girl" very soon.
Well written poem, tender words for that special lady.
Richie b.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Haha! Thank you so much richieb

[CAPOLAVORO]

I like it but I felt like it lacks one more push of emotion. You could make this one more better.
All in all, you are a great writer. Keep writing from the heart for that dream girl of yours. :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yea, I'll write more better whenever I'll write about my dream girl, btw thank you for your helping review😊

[MadWaffles]

Not bad, but it was ind of hard to understand. Use some different words, and don't make others pleural.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Okay sure, thank you

[Manu]

This one is dreamy yet innocent write. I liked the originality, simplicity and sweetness of this write.
Lovely poem, Farhan!
Keep writing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much for ur lovely review

[Sasha]

This is beautifully written poem. loved it.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[Valentine]

Lovely thoughts in this write. Every lines does not have to rhyme, you can use free verse writes too. Valentine

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you..your review means alot to me

[Harley Quinn]

I think this is very beautiful. I would enjoy reading more poems like this.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Erica

[Red Rose]

Haha it's cute :)
I'm sure your dream girl will have a smile on her face after reading this.
Keep it up!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Haha! I wish she could read...thank you so much