The Unknown Place

What if?

Lets go to the world,

Where there's no wealthy nor poverty.

Lets go to the world,

Where's no border to divide,

the place where comfort in stride.

Lets go to the world,

Where's nothing as racism,

people have faith in humanism.

Lets go to the world,

where peace wanders in the air,

the place where competition doesn't take place.

Lets go to the world,

where creatures aren't slaughtered,

the place where nature aren't shattered.

lets go to the world,

where crime is the only thing getting murdered.

Reviews

[Lorry]

Sign me up please. :)
Really like this piece Farhan, although I'm sure that place already exists.....In children's eyes that have not yet been taught our ridiculous hate of anything different from ourselves. Maybe if we stop teaching them our own mistakes, we can leave the world a better place for the next generation.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you, and you are absolutely right nemo..thays what I was thinking ..Agreed with your words..this must put into action..

[angeleapaugh]

I really enjoyed this . Thank you for sharing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

I'm glad u liked it thnx😉.and welcome

[Lovecraft]

Very nice poem about a more Utopian world. A beautiful sentiment in an unfortunately brutal reality.

Well-written, though a few grammar issues reside but don't take away anything from this piece.

Good job.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much..for your kind review..

[mercy party]

That last line was great and give's the reader a clear view of your passion towards changing the world. quality poem!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you mercy thank you so much😊

[Zoya]

Quite a world to live in! If these were the principles, this world would have been a wonderful place, no doubt... A brilliant concept...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Zoe..it means alott

[Zoya]

Don't mention it...

[Red Rose]

Yes it's true like everyone says that no world exists like this. But why don't we try creating a place with peace and harmony.
Of course it can't be the entire world. But why not a country, a city, a neighborhood, or at least a home?

A good topic to write about.. Well done :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Agree with you Rose. ...and thank you for a kind review..

[Manu]

I too wish to witness such type of world if there is any one.. I hope we can all try to make our world a better place to live in..
Nice one, Farhan.
Thought provoking one!
Peace

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much..I'm glad ..

[Najam Us Saher]

It is a good thing to have hope but it hurts the most when that hope seems to be fictitious. Very well written. I guess everyone wants to stay in that kind of world.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Well thank you Saher..Its abitter truth that those place doesn't exist..but I think we can make it here on our planet😉

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Firstly,it's very sad to know that any such place never existed. Let's hope for peace in the future.Im sure you must must have written this expressing your anger over trump's speech.
Wonderful expressions!!

[Najam Us Saher]

I agree with you Tazeen. While reading this poem I also felt that maybe he wrote this poem in frustration or in response to that news.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you tazeen..actually I didn't heard trump's speech..coz I never fi d politics interesting..but this one came out of frustration...and thank you soo much for both to liking this poem..😊