Once He Was

Ragging, Hurt.

Once he was Good,

on whom we didn't trust,

Who didn't have choice,

Who was left alone in Dark.

Once he was Brave,

On whom We made fun,

The One who was hurt,

Who was pushed into Dark.

Once he was Intelligent,

whose accompany we refused,

Who faced all the laughter,

who was dead inside himself.

Once he was Happy,

Before we hurts him,

Before we prey him by hatred,

Once we denied him,

Before He went For Bad.

Author's Note

We can be the reason for some one's Devious Mind..

Reviews

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Honest poem!
I completely agree to these meaningful phrases...
Criticizing someine can prove disastrous and can hurt badly!
And we should realize that everyone is capable of doing great things and underestimating people is the biggest sin!
Last paragraph it should be "hurt"
Avoid using capital inbetween cause it simply destroys the flow.
I admire its originality! :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you tazeen soo muchh😊

[Surya]

Yeah, I agree...It reminded of the movie table no. 21...
It's a needed write now a days specially for students, it shows what is the pain to sufferee...I enjoyed Farha..:)

[Surya]

Sorry Farhan*

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Surya...and its okay

[Valentine]

Sounds and reads like the bullying going around in schools and on face book. Valentine

[Dr. YumnaKay]

The spirit and essence of this poem is good indeed! A person can be destroyed by mere words cast upon him of hatred..
However there are certain grammatical errors on which if you corrected would make the flow even better.
Good write :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you😊😊

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and powerful thoughts. We can make people mean and nasty. All of us have limits. The good description left something for the reader to think about. Thank you Farhan for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much ur review means alot to me

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.