The first step

Poem is about to go forward for chasing you dreams and wishes.

There would be loads of obstacles,
There would be cuts on your path,
You must go through, Take the step.

There would be stopper on your dreams,
There would be loads of haters to come,
You must go through, take the step.

They would drag you back,
Don't get collapse, fly even higher.
Sometimes there could be less applause for you,
But You must go on, and take the step.

There would be few to appreciate your efforts,
There would be few to praise you,
You need to trust yourself, and take the step.

Author's Note

There may be some grammatical mistakes oopss...

Reviews

[iamshadowine]

I could relate to this poem so nicely! When I started writing, everyone took it as a joke, but because of a few people who trusted me, I carried it on.

"There would be few to appreciate your efforts,
There would be few to praise you,
You need to trust yourself, and take the step. "
These lines have become the reality of my life :)

It's true that many people wouldn't clap for you or give you an applause. Mainly because of; 1) either they are jealous or 2) they don't want you to be there.

Excellent poem!
Keep Writing :D

[Farhan Shaikh]

Ye, few to appreciates and that few will be enough for us if they truly believe in us..Thank you for your kind review Shadowine😊 and Good luck for your further work

[Surya]

Yeah that's what exactly happens, heart breaks, time doesn't give you any support, people stab at your back, but go on chase your dreams,...struggle definitely pays off..:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Absolutely right surya

[Tazeen Ahmed]

whoa! your writing conveys great sense despite the simplicity of it . I really appreciate the way you have impression-ed the obstacles ...
your writing is getting better ..just keep writing:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much Tazeen..ur review Motivates me indeed..

[Tazeen Ahmed]

you are always welcome!

[MadWaffles]

It doesn't really rime but it is VERY good!!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for your review😊

[Red Rose]

This is giving out a really strong message. Indeed, our desired path will not be easy to go on.
I would remove one word that is the "get" in "don't get collapse". Other than that your grammar has improved very much! Looks like u are takin the step.. :P

[Farhan Shaikh]

Than you so much..I am glad 😊