Unique patient

A story about a Patient who makes other smile..

Oh, I was sitting in front of my doctor..a female Doctor..she was looking gorgeous she keep talking to me but I am lost in her eyes...she asked me to admit in the hospital. Next day was my first day in hospital..beside my bed there was a boy who was looking more dreadful and his mother was crying for him, therefore I asked him, what happen?.."none of your business" he said..his mother said to me that "its been second time he committed suicide"..i was shocked...and I asked him "why" broke up with a girl?...he said u don't know what is love like...i said "I'll answer it later..but for now let me make it clear, she is your mom she's been loving and caring u since you're a baby, rather dying why can't you live for her, " he looked at his mom tears about to fall " You need a special therapy I said"..i asked his mom secretly for a good plan..on the next day a boy came in "Your mother is dead"..said to the boy and he started crying with a shout..and i said" what happen why are u crying?" He slapped me and said " my mom died "...i said "so what?? Why do you care?..2 days before u committed suicide 2nd time by not caring about ur mother, how would she felt" then his mother emerges from the door and smiling, the boy was shocked for a moment I said " look at her smile what will be happen when she sees u die the moment your soul will be out of your body?"

The boy Cries and hug his mother and apologize for the deed...on the next day I was wandering alone at the corridor of the hospital it was morning 5 am...street was empty and suddenly a Car hit a man and man falls down he was bleeding...and I shouted that 'somebody should do something' then I realize I am somebody..i ran out of the hospital..and lift the man up on my shoulder took him to the hospital...and there's no one there to help me to treat him..I called a nurse to admit him..she did, and I went to the doctor knocking his home door furiously.." A patient in a critical condition u must come" I said.." How u came out" he said.." I snap his collar and threaten him and then he came to the hospital for his treatment..few days later I was sitting in the corridor of hospital and the doctor come the female doctor whom I fancy..she said"why are u so caring?" I said" People are in danger..an old man cleaning floors, a guy who committed suicide twice, a man was wounded in an incident" why I shouldn't care?" She said me to calm down she also said me that she wants to tell me something and I knew what she's going to tell me she said that u have a stomach cancer..u have short time to live..and I said" that's why I wanna live double" on the night I called my friends in my ward and started party...a boy asked.

Me " u are dying? U don't afraid?" I said "no, why should I? Every one has to die..i am happy as I always" he asked " don't u have family?" I said " no I don't, and that's not the reason why I keep smiling" he asked " then what's the reason behind ur smile" I said" living life is the lost happiest thing happened in my life..life is the most beautiful adventure, u just need to fight to find happiness, and u must find it. What if we say no to sorrows, what if we live in ourslef like a King, it's all here in ur heart live like a mad people does..have u ever seend an abnormal said? Live like them or..live like a king..and die like a villain, Villain always smiles while dying" he asked have u ever be sad?? I am silent...in few days every patient in the hospital started enjoying their own company..atmosphere changes in the hospital..i kept sighting all of them happy with each other not worrying about the tensions and all...and then I realize it time to meet the God..calmly I walked on my bed I wrote something on a paper..kept it beside the boy and slept forever...

A boy Woke and red the paper It was written" u tried to die for a girl...u told me that I never know love..actually the one who was my Doctor, she is the one who I loved..and this is the moment when I am sad, while dying..such a happy life I am leaving...but no worries, the world is just a phrase we are passing through,heaven awaits for us.

Author's Note

I hope you all like it..

Reviews

[Tazeen Ahmed]

T'was interesting to read... There are for sure grammatical errors which must be corrected in order to make it perfect
Otherwise the story was just and good
A strong message has been conveyed

Try adding suspense to it
Maybe you could expand it more and add suspense
Or
Write it in the form of a book
Most important, if you want to be a story teller, try to inculcate the habit of reading books of great authors...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thanx for ur review...and I read harry potter books😊..jabra fan of the saga..

[Red Rose]

Hehe it's very dramatic! Inspirational as well..
I might suggest that you separate it into paragraphs.
It will be a lot easier to read then.
Yep, there are grammatical errors but your effort is really commendable.
Keep it up!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for ur advice....i am delighted that u like it