She taught me.

Poem describes love ...for a girl he misses

She taught me how to not fear,

when I was let down by others..

She taught me how to stand again,

when I was about to lose, when there's nothing to hold on.

She taught me how to smile,

when there are sorrows around,

when there's tears in my eyes.

She taught me how to come out of dark with our own,

when there's no one to pull, when I was afraid.

she taught me how to believe in ourselves,

when others are

against,

But she never taught me One thing,

How to live, when she's not around.

Author's Note

Boy misses his girl...he Showed his love in the poem

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

This piece is amazing...
The emotions and feelings here are so well described for the reader to get completely mesmerised....
I am so very glad reading this...
What the boy does
Just perfect love it shows....

keep writing my friend...
Anindita 😃

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you very much Anindita..I'm glad u like it😉

[Anindita Janhabee]

It's a pleasure dear...

[alexis]

Your a great poem writer.I wish I was this good,great job.:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you..but I am not great yet...don't worry u will be a good writer..every one once was a beginner..😊

[alexis]

Thanks and believe me your doing a good job.keep it up

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you once again😊

[alexis]

Can I use this poem?it's awesome

[Farhan Shaikh]

Ofcourse you can use!..but for what I might ask?

[alexis]

I was wanting to make it about this guy I like so are you okay about it

[Farhan Shaikh]

Okay...Ur wish..

[Lorry]

Nicely captured Farhan. We learn so much from those who show us that there is hope in hopelessness and notice us when we don't notice ourselves. The world is a better place for having these people in it, that take the time to show us it's okay to smile, yet as you so eloquently state in your last line, there is one important thing they can't teach us, losing them.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yep, Thank you for you're kind review Nemo😊

[Lorry]

You're welcome Farhan :)

[Kaylee]

Your writing proves to be very strong. Pushes the reader to feel a wide variety of emotions. Especially at the end of this piece. Good work!!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much😊

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts led to good ending.
"she taught me how to believe in ourselves,
when others are against,
But she never taught me One thing,
How to live, when she's not around.."
I liked the above lines. When we lose our teachers. We must gain wisdom and become the teacher. Thank you Farhan for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for ur kind review...i am glad u like it

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome.

[Neal S]

Wow! This brought out some unexpected emotions in me. Reminds me deeply of my mother and her passing. Just a beautifully written piece my friend!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you friend....i feel sorry to hear about your mother...

[Neal S]

No its okay. Its been a long time. But to just randomly click on a poem and BAM! quite beautiful

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you😊

[Sira YR]

AWWW! this is both sad and beautiful, I love how it just has a romantic vibe all throughout and then in the last two lines it becomes sad. Great Job and keep it up!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much😊

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

this is beautiful, I love the emotion behind it.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you😊 so much

[Shae-Leigh Johns]

of course