She taught me.

Poem describes love ...for a girl he misses

She taught me how to not fear,

when I was let down by others..

She taught me how to stand again,

when I was about to lose, when there's nothing to hold on.

She taught me how to smile,

when there are sorrows around,

when there's tears in my eyes.

She taught me how to come out of dark with our own,

when there's no one to pull, when I was afraid.

she taught me how to believe in ourselves,

when others are

against,

But she never taught me One thing,

How to live, when she's not around.

Author's Note

Boy misses his girl...he Showed his love in the poem

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

This piece is amazing...
The emotions and feelings here are so well described for the reader to get completely mesmerised....
I am so very glad reading this...
What the boy does
Just perfect love it shows....

keep writing my friend...
Anindita 😃

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you very much Anindita..I'm glad u like it😉

[Anindita Janhabee]

It's a pleasure dear...

[Addict With a Pen]

Very beautiful write. Sad ending..
I really like how you started all your stanzas with "she taught me", it makes it really meaningful. Great write friend.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much friend 😊

[Surya]

Haan, how to live without her..do you have any idea how to live without her, say me if u have an answer.
As usual a beautiful write from you Farhan.
Thank you for sharing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you brother😉 for your kind review..

[B]

Thats pretty sweet
I must say there is an immense amount of talent on WC from such young writers
Very well done
Please never stop !!!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you for your kind words...and yes I'll never gonna stop

[Johnny Dep]

Very beautiful, Each and every line carries emotions that boy felt, You have a played a melody here Farhan.
Thank you for sharing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much Mr. Johny dep..I'm glad u liked it.

[AYVID N]

A very moving piece. The concluding lines did full justice to the message of the poem. You are a very good writer. Thenk you for the friend request Farhan. 100/100

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much Divya for your very kind review and visit😊

[AYVID N]

Welcome 😊

[isislynn]

I loved! Nice, romantic and silky!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you isislynn for your kind visit

[Valentine]

A whole lot said in a few words. Valentine

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much😊

[Dr. Wood ?]

great finish, yeah....I liked it

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank yoi😊

[mercy party]

the way you ended was smart. It allowed the reader to really be moved. I connected to the line "come out of the dark with our own." lines like that make a poem stand out. nice!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much
..I'm glad u liked it😉

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the entire concept of this poem how a person who means so much to you suddenly begins to feel the world to you. And when they leave that is the thing we couldn't imagine in our worst nightmares.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you soo much Saher😊