She taught me.

Poem describes love ...for a girl he misses

She taught me how to not fear,

when I was let down by others..

She taught me how to stand again,

when I was about to lose, when there's nothing to hold on.

She taught me how to smile,

when there are sorrows around,

when there's tears in my eyes.

She taught me how to come out of dark with our own,

when there's no one to pull, when I was afraid.

she taught me how to believe in ourselves,

when others are

against,

But she never taught me One thing,

How to live, when she's not around.

Author's Note

Boy misses his girl...he Showed his love in the poem

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

This piece is amazing...
The emotions and feelings here are so well described for the reader to get completely mesmerised....
I am so very glad reading this...
What the boy does
Just perfect love it shows....

keep writing my friend...
Anindita 😃

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you very much Anindita..I'm glad u like it😉

[Anindita Janhabee]

It's a pleasure dear...

[matrixmark]

An emotional piece, powerful piece. When you find the one who stand by you through thick and thin, then this is what this piece is all about. Your words ring true and have such depth and meaning behind them. To find 'the one' is so difficult to do. But when you do, then this piece is exactly how you will begin to feel.

Such a short piece, but such impacting words.
Great work.

Mark.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much mark😊

[matrixmark]

Pleasure to have read this piece.
Mark.

[Ubaid Nasir]

nice... you're great at playing with words

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you bro, its a surprise for me to see you here😊

[RahmaChio]

This is such a deep writing. great job

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you! ...

[Luna]

I see you blew everyone away with the last line. A heart wrenching piece but a pleasant one indeed. At first there was curiosity and than *BOOM* in the face. Nice one :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's really kind words Luna thank you 😊

[Sonakshi Arora]

This is so well written. Whether it is a mother or a teacher , we cannot live without them . Transcends lovely and emotional vibes!

But she never taught me One thing,
How to live, when she's not around..

The last lines​ hit me hard....

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much sonakshi

[Eden-Rose]

Such a beautiful piece of writing. It brings a tear to my eye. It makes me think of my mother and that makes me cry. Just an all around amazing piece of writing.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Ohh! Thank you for your time😨

[Eden-Rose]

Scaring away potential friends one line at a time.

[emmajoy]

This is made even more touching by that first word, 'she' . You've created a heart by using that word, then wrapped it with emotions and thought and.. learning. A sad finish but actually exactly how it is when a support, a love, a guardian in and for your life, falls away for some reason. Yes, a sad finish that proves that woman's value in life.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Emma for your kind review and precious time

[CAPOLAVORO]

"she taught me how to believe in ourselves,
when others are against,
But she never taught me One thing,
How to live, when she's not around.."

You started it with great love in your mind, Did not expect you would end it with great despair. Still it was good even if you twist it around in the last part because you slowly brings the reader to that part when you slowly talks about what you cannot do. Well done. -CAPOLAVORO

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much ..it means alot..

[mou]

standing all the time beside someone and let all the storm cross me first...a very fortunate person ,who has such a support in life..beautiful write

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much😊

[Jes' Pi]

Very lovely poem, sincere and sad.
I love it so much, I can say.
NEVER stop writing:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you sooo much...meaningful words😊