She taught me.

Poem describes love ...for a girl he misses

She taught me how to not fear,

when I was let down by others..

She taught me how to stand again,

when I was about to lose, when there's nothing to hold on.

She taught me how to smile,

when there are sorrows around,

when there's tears in my eyes.

She taught me how to come out of dark with our own,

when there's no one to pull, when I was afraid.

she taught me how to believe in ourselves,

when others are

against,

But she never taught me One thing,

How to live, when she's not around.

Author's Note

Boy misses his girl...he Showed his love in the poem

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

This piece is amazing...
The emotions and feelings here are so well described for the reader to get completely mesmerised....
I am so very glad reading this...
What the boy does
Just perfect love it shows....

keep writing my friend...
Anindita 😃

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you very much Anindita..I'm glad u like it😉

[Anindita Janhabee]

It's a pleasure dear...

[Mel Jayne]

This is quite complex and interesting. I think that if you made the first line into a sentence it might lift this piece into a more polished thing. I liked the emotional language used throughout, I think that it adds depth and life to the character.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yep, thank you soo much jayne

[Cœur]

I enjoyed this piece a lot. It could be taken in several different ways instead of just one, making it less boring than other poems. Good work.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[writ rajat]

Nice one she also taught you to love

[Farhan Shaikh]

Yepp..thank yoi

[heartspeaks]

Beautiful.... the emotion is so strong and the best part anyone can relate it to anyone...be it for mother , sister , friend or a lover.... this is great... It is damn emotional and the last line pulled it like WOW! great job

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you sooo much...

[Mr.Writer]

This was actually very emotional... Is it our mothers?
I loved this sweet, gentle poem of yours :)
Keep it up :)
Just one request to her...
"Say you won't let go..."
:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

We cam relate this to any loving woman/girl..btw thank you

[Paradox]

But she never taught me One thing,
How to live, when she's not around..


She did not teach another thing. How to find words to review this kind of a poem!
I am spellbound

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's really kind of you, Thank you

[Island Hippy]

A very emotional read, I think the repetition works very well and the overall piece has a lovely flow.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much

[Cameron Berry]

This was a nice piece. Continual return to "She" accentuated the point, and this was a solid ode to the feminine figures in our lives.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much for your kind reviews

[Wajiha Nayeem]

i am left speechless with these words,this poem has a lot in it.wonderful,just keep writing

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you so much😊for kind words

[Wajiha Nayeem]

that's my pleasure.just keep writing beautiful feelings as such.just wonderful

[Anjali]

It's so sweet and a little sad too, in the end. Amazing write!

[Farhan Shaikh]

Thank you Anjali