Way To Live

Way To Live

A Poem by Farhan Shaikh
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A Poem describes the little Positive way to live our life..

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By with you live,
One day you'll give,
Don't ever blame our life,
Its beautifull when we smile,

Don't wait for others,
Get out of the Dark,
Take some courage,
you'll find a brighten spark,

Spark is enough,
To Come out of bad,
Live in the Light,
One day you'll be Glad.

© 2016 Farhan Shaikh


Author's Note

Farhan Shaikh
Ignore Grammer mistakes

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It's a very encouraging and positive poem. Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Farhan Shaikh

7 Years Ago

Tahnk you saher😊
I agree.
"Spark is enough,
To Come out of bad,
Live in the Light,
One day you'll be Glad. "
I liked the above line and the positive feel of the poetry. Thank you Farhan for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Farhan Shaikh

7 Years Ago

Thank tou😊😊...
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.
nice ans short. good rhyme scheme and meaningful as well. good attempt

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Farhan Shaikh

7 Years Ago

Thnx Alot😊 Thnx for visiting
I love this inspirational poem. I like the way your wrote this.
Keep up good work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Farhan Shaikh

7 Years Ago

Thnk u so much😊
Don't try to force to rhyme.. Write it as it comes.. If the meaning is clear it will be good.. There aren't much grammar mistakes as much as there are tenses mistakes.. Also the first line of your poem has no clear meaning...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Farhan Shaikh

7 Years Ago

Got it👍..i'll definatley overcome with my mistakes..thnx for reading btw
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

Oh you are welcome☺
Well written!! Well conveyed!!
My advice would be to use more poetic devices to enhance it's sound...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Farhan Shaikh

7 Years Ago

Thank you, for visiting..i'll definately consider on ur advice

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Added on December 2, 2016
Last Updated on December 16, 2016
Tags: courage, happiness..

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Farhan Shaikh
Farhan Shaikh

Mumbai, India



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