This Carmine Rose

This comes from the soul. And there's nothing to be said that hasn't already been said... "Though lovers be lost love shall not; And death shall have no dominion." - Dylan Thomas

And it's Wonderous strange... My heartbeat...  How our love outlived you....

This indignant heart in it's privaledged role...

as the carmine rose you nurtured to life.

Exalted by design beyond thorns of reproach

Recalls your face in artistic admiration

Collecting dewdrop tears

Enduring the tempest to grow as strong

As the love that held it skyward

Through all storms to remain as gentle to your touch.

Eternal unto you.  

Reviews

[J.S. Pua]

i kind of like this..
these line, especially:

"And it's Wonderous strange... My heartbeat... How our love outlived you...."

good work..