Broken

I've been writing amateur style. This my first real thought out writing. Criticism please?

As I try to get over a broken heart,
I watch every piece shatter apart,

Love can taste so damn tart,
Although, I could just be smart

And go back to the start, 
Pick up each & every part. 

While she acts like nothing effected her' soul,
I just try to look past this huge gaping hole,

Sad to say, but my heart isn't completely whole,
A burning hatred is left inside me, the coal.

A twenty dollar bill goes pretty far after the toll,
I'll be starting life elsewhere, with a new goal.

Author's Note

Please keep this honest! I need criticism!

Reviews

[Shivam Murari]

This is your first poem? First of warm welcome to W.C. The poem is good and given that it is your first it is excellent. You have maintained good rhyme scheme and flow. Meaning is good and clear either. Good attempt. Read and review my poems too :)