Ray of hope

In the midst of all turmoil

where all doors were on lock down

A spark of ray was brought down

It ignited all the dim lights

Full of energy they reached great heights

All turmoil broke loose

All chains broke loose

Battered and defeated they fell

Better and brighter the lights beamed

Stronger and stronger they burnt

Freely and lively they emitted hope to the nearby vessels

Freely and lively they emitted love to the unloved

Filling empty vessels with energy they did

Igniting all on their path they did

Revived the down cast they did

They emitted hope

the ray of hope

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