Love At First Sight

Brilliant eyes opened wide,

sparkling orbs radiating incandescent light

upon the dark face of my loneliness.

 

A vast array of spectral wonders

dance just within the periphery of my mind,

like a beacon of hope

emitting a kaleidoscope of pleasing images

that soothe the inner confines of my heart,

just one look

and my life is revealed

within those loving eyes.

Reviews

[Lorry]

Perfectly penned look at love that eludes, for now. You capture perfectly how a person knows love, it's all in the eyes and in the right set, your life can be revealed. So simple now that I have read this, yet trying to describe it myself looks clumsy in comparison. Great job.