Space And Time, Making Love

Space And Time, Making Love

A Poem by Notapoet

How does one traverse the distance

Between two hearts separated by love

 

How can one pass the infinite expanse

Of time created by their loneliness

 

Will their longing and heartache

Explode Like a supernova

 

Creating a vortex

That sends them both spiraling

Into an abyssal plutonic existence

 

Or will their passion and desire

Be strong enough to bend and warp the continuum

 

Bringing the far ends of the universe 

In upon its self

 

Allowing their love to join once again 

Creating a intergalactic paradox

Of celestial oneness 

© 2016 Notapoet


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Beautifully written. As I read it I thought of a scene in the tv series Cosmos, which shows the entire universe bending around on itself just as your words describe, making the farthest points of existence, be but a step away. I am pretty sure that is what love is meant to do, remove boundaries and span more than mere distance. A wonderfully connected write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Notapoet

8 Years Ago

Thank you for giving it a read taking time to comment, yours and the communities comments give me in.. read more
Lorry

8 Years Ago

Thank you, that's what the café should be about. Look forward to reading more.



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Beautifully written. As I read it I thought of a scene in the tv series Cosmos, which shows the entire universe bending around on itself just as your words describe, making the farthest points of existence, be but a step away. I am pretty sure that is what love is meant to do, remove boundaries and span more than mere distance. A wonderfully connected write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Notapoet

8 Years Ago

Thank you for giving it a read taking time to comment, yours and the communities comments give me in.. read more
Lorry

8 Years Ago

Thank you, that's what the café should be about. Look forward to reading more.

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Added on August 14, 2016
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Tags: Love, Life, Relationship

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Notapoet
Notapoet

Austin, TX



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