Rising In Love

Rising In Love

A Poem by Falling Awake
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"Happiness is only real when shared," Christopher McCandless

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Waves seep over sand,

The Sun crests,

We’re hand in hand.


Daybreak’s unfolding,

To a shared beholding,

Our minds are molding…

I can feel us growing... together.


We converge concurrently,

You mirror me back to me, 

I now see, that our energy,

Is feeding off each other…


What was once was I, only,

Then, so proud to be lonely,

Is now us in sync,  I rethink,

My innate pull to isolation…


With consideration, I recognize,

That the rise reflected in your eyes,

Tightens my transcendental ties,

To the source and all that may comprise.


As you pulse through my soul,

I see I’m Part of the whole, 

And each second has played a role,

To amount to this singular moment…


The two of us aligned in divine time,

I sense my inner Peace as a sign,

That your company completes mine,

I feel I belong, here is meant for me....


I’ve found this new memory

With you, pure serenity,

And it beats every,

Single sunrise alone.

© 2024 Falling Awake


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"It beats every, Single sunrise alone". Amazing. Yes. The joys of being together with someone who really cares about you, who loves you. Sometimes people swear to single life to prevent from being hurt; you captured it so eloquently here- "I sense my inner Peace as a sign, that your company completes mine". Very nice, Bravo

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Falling Awake

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thank you so very much for connecting! I appreciate and enjoy your input..I feel like you you get wh.. read more
Brad Dehler

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You are most welcome! Yes, I feel i get it. That is a great feeling as a writer...



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"It beats every, Single sunrise alone". Amazing. Yes. The joys of being together with someone who really cares about you, who loves you. Sometimes people swear to single life to prevent from being hurt; you captured it so eloquently here- "I sense my inner Peace as a sign, that your company completes mine". Very nice, Bravo

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Falling Awake

3 Months Ago

thank you so very much for connecting! I appreciate and enjoy your input..I feel like you you get wh.. read more
Brad Dehler

3 Months Ago

You are most welcome! Yes, I feel i get it. That is a great feeling as a writer...

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Added on May 31, 2024
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Tags: relationship, love, society, spiritual, friendship, free verse, reflection, rhyme

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Falling Awake
Falling Awake

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