Expansive

Expansive

A Poem by Falling Awake

Eyelids peel away 
Pupils enlarge 
Neural synapses open 

Air slips in my veins 
Blood stream widens 
Each cell breathes new energy

My heart beats faster 
More expansive 
Yet focused on what matters 

Well-developed thoughts 
Faster in time 
Contemplative in nature 

Well-being laced
I’m euphoric 
With eternal unrest eased 

Here, the time flows less agonizingly 
With my increased engagement across life
And feelings of invincibility 
I even feel an urge for connection…
Feel excitement for the mystery…
Excitement for the opportunities…

I’m excited again

© 2024 Falling Awake


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Your poem builds its emotions, line and phrase from start to finish. Your last line is joyful, hopeful and somehow - courageous! ' I’m euphoric .. .. With eternal unrest eased '


Posted 8 Months Ago


Falling Awake

3 Months Ago

this is the best possible feedback I can hope for and it means so very much to me ! thank you!
Fantastic work. You make this come alive.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Falling Awake

3 Months Ago

thank you so very much, as it means a lot coming from you : )

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Added on February 22, 2024
Last Updated on February 22, 2024
Tags: free verse, spiritual, reflection, awareness, self awareness

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Falling Awake
Falling Awake

USA



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Mentally (ch)ill conscious seeker. Understanding through poetry. more..

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