To Feel

To Feel

A Poem by Ian Lundin
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04-16-08

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I want to feel
genuine
like I'm not forcing this smile
All the time

I want to feel
as if I'm
not completely invisible
All the time

I want to feel
so inclined
driven to do something more than
Take my time

I want to feel
as though I
could really say what's on my mind
Just sometimes

© 2008 Ian Lundin


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a passing sigh, love the third stanza.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Ian Lundin
Ian Lundin

South Lake Tahoe, CA



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