Lady of Oath

i wrote as a tribute for women that fight battles on there own.wome of strength.

She walks around head held high
Her thoughts running wild
of endless dreams.

She cast her eyesight on those
In need.
Her presence fills the hearts
those left broken and empty.

She is a woman of great power.
She is as sweet as the gentle dove.

God cast his eyes on her hardened heart,
and softens it from within.

She walks around these streets of life;
She bows down to the highest throne.
She found her lover’s arm covers her with love.

Their eyes cast on her gentle soul.
Her dreams filled
and her heart soars.

 

Author's Note

anything goes...

Reviews

[MysticMirage]

I like how you've presented the scenes in fragments. It's like going through a flashback in somone's mind. Well done!

[FallenWingz]

anything goes, i meant that by....whatever the reader feels about it....thats my point i was making...and about the poem, it actually is a personal emotion i felt at the time...im not completely new to getting reviews..jsut wanted to see what other ppl wud get from my poetry..

[TheFemininePad]

This is a decent poem that presents a good moral story. I just don't feel the emotions that you are trying to convey here. I don't see how its personal to you. Also your Author's Note is alittle confusing. What do you mean by anything goes?