Glitter

Glitter,
Stars,
Smiles,
Hugs,
Love,
Haha,
Those are never free,
It costs your soul
Gut wrenching fools,
The forest that stole fairies,
Should know,
That when you try to see these they disappear ,
They are just figments of your imagination,
Smile,it'll cost you honey,
So dance in this glitter,
While it lasts

Reviews

[CL]

I would remove the "haha". I feel it makes it sound childish, i am also not quite sure where you were going with this poem, it needs a more established theme.

[Follan]

Dear CL,

This poem has no theme for it is the soul of the dead and gone.read moreDear CL,

This poem has no theme for it is the soul of the dead and gone.
What is there to feel when the whole world is against your soul that has simply dissolved to dust.But I thank you for reading