The first time

The first time you hugged me
I thought I had seen a shooting star,heading my way
Even if this was just a California dessert,
The first time you kissed me
I thought the world had disappear but you still were there
The stars crackled the moon chuckled as if to say young love,
Even if I was an dead star vacant with no shine,
...
The first time she hugged me,
I thought my heart danced,
But why is that after all we were just plain buds,
The first time she kissed me
There was this empty feeling filling me,
Like I was lost in space.
But why she didn't say she love me ?
...
The first time ,the first time,
I was loved
But why do I feel so lonely?
Aren't closed enough?
Didn't we kiss ,hug?
Why am I still so empty?
....
Lacing my heart with chains and knives ,
Is this the first time?

Reviews

[NicholeHemstock]

I really like the concept and the way you tied it together at the end. It shows and depicts the confusion accurately.

[Follan]

Thank you,Ms.Hemstock.
I'm not sure of this either, this is win or lose piece.