Fool

He tells me he loves me dearly.
He knows I still love him
He knows it
He tells me he's sorry for not being my superhero
He knows he's got me
He tells me he still cares
And that he always will.
But he still wouldn't change
He's gotten me
He tells me loves me so much
But he's never changing
I believe him,
I am a fool,
I leave him but he's still in my heart..
He knows it.
He knows I will still be at his doorstep everyday..
He knows I will come crying
He knows that I love him too much to care..
He knows I am a fool..
So even if he couldn't be my superhero I will love him..
Because I am a simple fool
But I don't care
Fool..fool.fool
That's what I am..

Reviews

[NicholeHemstock]

You should change the first line to "he tells me he loves me so much" it makes more sense to the reader that way. Over all, your subject matter is good, but you need to work on the emotion that you share with the reader. I would love to see something with more passion. This is good, but you can do better. :)