Essentiality

It's like nothing I've seen before..

When she falls.. 

She gets hurt..

But she keeps standing..

I love her..

Yet, i'm so surprised of her not even seeing that

I try my hardest to understand her..

Yet she always ends up falling...

And a tear forms in my eye...

As i cry..

She falls..

I try catching her..

Always..

Try..

To catch her...

But I always fail...

I just don't understand how she wants to be treated...

And it feels like her best friend...

One of my Closest friends..

Means more than me...

It feels like we become more distanced every f*****g day... 

And my music becomes more and more distorted..

I can't find any possible way of changing what i think i am..

Yet i'm just me... 

Reviews

[Color of the Iris]

When reading this, you feel like you're in a dream and you're watching yourself and "her" reinact those precious memories in your mind. It's really sweet to see the softer, more affectionate side of a really misunderstood guy come out and display his love for someone he considers so fragile and innocent. I can tell you would do anything for "her". You guard her heart and you stand her ground... you would be "her" everything and you wrote this poem really well.

This is very wonderful... nice to see you in a new light.

[Brook Hughes]

I love the emotions that u have expressed for this girl... truly amazing:) Kinda sad but speaks the truth.. I love the last 3 lines the most:) Keep it up:)

[Black]

an interesting emotion which is hard to describe or to explain
you did a pretty good job

[SINDE]

I red this piece beyond your words and I can relate to it. Sometimes you don't relly understand what you mean to someone you care a lot about. Great piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Some separation is possible by life and problems. A wise person hold on tight and will roll with the flow to keep a special person happy and content. Nothing good is easy. Must fight for love or any worthwhile desire. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I hope whatever problem you're having with in this write that will be solved :)
Great job!

[Dayran]

Winter goes, spring comes and the grass grows by itself - Zen. Nice write.

[stars are far]

This was so expressing.. I loved that ..
And well i just want to say girls are not easy to understsnd ..
Well done ... Keep that up :)