A Shot At Valentine

A Shot At Valentine

A Poem by FallenHeroXx

Oh valentine

Oh valentine

How i’d love to piss in your face and s**t on your table

Yeah, I’m in a relationship

I love her

Best valentine ever.

But this goes out to the people who feel bad

Who’s not loved by another in an affectionate relationship..

This day is fucked for all of you

And yes

I know

But it gets better!

It Does!

© 2012 FallenHeroXx


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Haha!
I LOVE the positive ending.
"But it gets better!
It Does!"

I honestly didn't believe I would "hear" you "say" these words, now I know I was wrong.
I take my hat off for you. :P
Now for the entire poem, I LOVED IT!
Very describing, awesome job done here.

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very different view on most peoples favorite romantic holiday! Very humorous

Posted 11 Years Ago


hah great write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love this :D it is hilarious but yet true.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lol:) very interesting... :) pretty funny really:p This day is f***** up 4 all u.. lol:) nice poem:) Happy late V-day:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Valentine is the day for love. Sometime can find someone is alone and maybe create the emotion of love and hope. I like the directness and the purpose of this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


so nicee .....
sweeetttttt :D
happy valentines day :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha!
I LOVE the positive ending.
"But it gets better!
It Does!"

I honestly didn't believe I would "hear" you "say" these words, now I know I was wrong.
I take my hat off for you. :P
Now for the entire poem, I LOVED IT!
Very describing, awesome job done here.

~A Fallen Heroine~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*claps* nicely done. perfectly well said. my new favorite piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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