I'm out.

It’s fun huh…

How one minute you’ve got it all?

Next minute you have nothing…

I’ve seen soldier’s hours before shipping out…

Seems like their way of thinking..

Because they die..

Side by side..

Every..

Day..

But they get back up…

Try to collect themselves..

I’m not a fallen hero…

F**k no…

I’m just a b***h who couldn’t control himself…

Reviews

[K-mo]

this is really good, heartfelt and well put together

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and honest words. Sometime if we look at another situation. Our problems seem less painful. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Brook Hughes]

great way of showing what soldiers go through day to day. basically fight and die. not much to it. love the lines: how one minute you've got it all... next minute you have nothing:) so true! turn your back for second and what was in front of you was gone at the drop of a hatch:) Keep up the good work:)

[Dayran]

A realization is the beginning of many things. Keep at it. A clear meaning in the verse.