An Invitation To Annihiliation.

An invitation to annihilation..

Yeah..

That’s my life for yah..

To look beyond the fiery blackened sky..

Even though the kicks and punches makes me fall..

I have this way of getting back up..

Just take all the torment for everyone you know..

Let it sink in your skin..

Make it your torment..

And then..

You fall..

You get thrown down like never before..

Yeah that’s where I’m at..

But It’s like..

I can’t get back up..

I spit poison every time I get scared..

So that’s why..

But this love..

It’s Endless..

It’s Namelezz..

And now I give you a solemn goodbye..

And with that said..

I bid you all goodnight..

 

And it is merely A Fallen Hero to you… 

Author's Note

Honest Opinion..

Reviews

[Brook Hughes]

Interesting and very descriptive. I love the line... To look beyond the fiery blackened sky:) On rainy days, i look up at the dark clouds and sometimes wonder whats beyond them... prolly endless possibilites. Keep up the good work Fallen Hero:)

[OtherWorldWoman]

I love this. Its powerful and strongly solemn. Keep it up.

[Carrion.]

I enjoyed it. Although, I question why at the end of "Endless", you put to "s"s but at the end of "nameless", you put two "z"s
o-O
i love it. the title immediately caught maaii attention :3

[Dayran]

Good self guidance for the hero who's decided to take on all and come to assert his own self will. Could do with a dose of patience.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Excellent poem.

[Inyourshadow]

Nothing more entreating than an ode to ones loved one, the passionate way in which you express your heart is beautiful crafted, keep the love flowing and keep em' coming

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. I like when you desire to express with strength and power.
"So that’s why..
But this love..
It’s Endless..
It’s Namelezz.."
A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Namelezz]

I loved this,
great job dear!
Keep it up and keep your head held high.
I will love you forever :)

~Namelezz~

[Margarette]

I like the way you depicted the fallen hero as a person who falls, can't get up but still has a will to love. Great writing! Hope to see more of your poems.

[A Risen Heroine.]

"But this love..
It's Endless..
It's Namelezz.."

I like it!
You better take care of her Fallen.
Well done and keep up he good work.

~A Fallen Heroine~