F**k It!

Destruction leaps at me.

Everyone i ever loved is looking..

I have to complete this..

Finish the task of holding the world on my shoulder..

Make everyone see that the pathetic puny weak sick Fallen Hero..

Is capable of something..

Letting the world go..

My feeble life is a mess..

Nothing I ever did..

Was right..

And now I’m alone again..

We live in a world where someone can say “god told me to kill them” and get a lower punishment..

That’s not right..

I don’t want to live in this world..

F**K IT!!!

Reviews

[miguelbovine]

Powerful! I could picture the person saying this as someone who doesnt always want to do the right thing but something inside him keeps him going. and In the end he feels all the s**t he's done has changed little

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and powerful words. Anger can lead you to a dead-end. Better to find a good path and try to find some peace and calm. Most of us dig our own hole and need to learn from mistakes and go forward. A million places to go and a millions thing that can be touched. Turn anger into energy and find a good place to be. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[A Risen Heroine.]

You promised you'd never leave, and you're so gonna keep that promise.
I'll kick your a*s if not.
You know I can.
All in all, it's a strong poem.
Liked it.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Pretty Ugly]

This was good...but at the same time, not good at all. Suicide is absolute bull s**t. Maybe in your point of view this poem isn't about suicide, but in my point of view it is. Sure, the world treats us like s**t and people treat us like s**t, but suicide and hurting yourself just makes them win.
I'm just saying, bro...