The Hollow Pieces Pt1

Discarded everything..

Fucked up and nearly killed myself...

This isn't like the cruel wake-up call from a beautiful dream..

It's just a goodbye...

F**k off!!!

All of my feelings..

They’re totally unreal..

Nothing I’ve ever done can stop them..

I hate them..

I hate myself..

I want out..

Please spare me of this pain..

Having to grab my head screaming every five minutes..

That’s pain..

My thoughts hurt…

They hurt so bad..

Like nothing I do stops them..

So I put some music on..

So loud that the whole city hears it..

And you know what?

I’m proud..

Everything in me begs me to give in..

Become a monster of complete agony..

But I won’t

Not because I couldn’t bear it..

Simply because..

I NEVER GIVE IN!

Not to you..

Not to anyone..

And it’s still A Fallen Hero To You

Author's Note

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

raw and potent.. the impact is surely felt.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. When youth is your advantage. The internal struggle to know peace is a forever battle. I like the feel of trying to overcome many things in the poem. Easy to become a monster. Hard to stand your ground and go forward and leave the s**t behind. A excellent poem.
Coyote