The Letter Pt3

The Letter pt3

Are you there?

That was all I really heard.

I couldn’t exactly place the voice.

I now know that endless tales of corruption and disappointment was what I heard.

Corrupted souls of my enemies and allies.

A war that can’t be won.

I’m going out of my f*****g mind.

Worried sick about My Heroine.

“I Feel like a wound, Like I’ve got a f*****g gun against my head”

Yeah.

That’s how I feel.

That’s how everyone’s dying breath made me.

I’m not exactly perfect.

I have many a flaw.

Yet I win flawlessly.

I don’t get it.

It’s like I’m in a black pit.

It’s closing on me.

I’m not that free.

My eternal hate will fall.

I’ll be everything that’s left after it all.

And it’s still A Fallen Hero to you

Author's Note

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[DearSweetAgony]

This is really great.
A flawless job well done I would say.
I like feelings that you've placed in this write.
It is truly WONDERFUL!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the strong words in this poem. I like how each statement got stronger and more detail. No perfection in this world. Just people trying to do the right things. I like the complete poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote