Lost in Heaven

This is so f*****g deceptive..

My reality is really perceptive..

The words I use will never show me..

How I could possibly be f*****g free..

I want to be perfect..

But I’m definitely not f*****g worth it..

I can’t see you..

Am I through?

I’m so f*****g dead..

I want to shoot a bullet to my head..

I can’t find any sort of comfort..

I’m just looking for some sort..

Of your love..

Author's Note

Honest Opinion

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Impossible to be perfect. Sometime finding a place where we are content and can feel some happiness. I like the directness and strength of all your poetry. You write with a honest pen seeking answers to questions that have no answers. Love is the best and worst day of a life. When in love. Hold on tight and be thankful. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cynthia]

A lovely write, I don't know if 'lovely' is the word,
but the emotions are clear, and the power of it is strong.
I like it a lot, but just maybe you can add a little more?
Nice Job!

[A Risen Heroine.]

I like this a lot..
I love you babe.
Keep up the awesome work and thanks for sharing.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Morgan]

lovely(: i wish more people wrote like this ... ah , i know i do lol