Not At All

Did the b******s I know miss me?

Not at all!

Do I care? 

Not at all!

I just can’t breathe in this empty space..

Can’t find that sudden escape pod..

F**k this pain..

Wish I was you not I..

Do these fuckers I love hate me?

Not at all..

Do I care? 

Not at all..

This really gets to me..

Nothing usually pisses me off this much..

But when I read it..

I just went crazy and I went out and fucked up..

Did anyone ever see me for who I really am?

Not at all

Did I ever care?

Not at all

Author's Note

Honest opinion?

Reviews

[FaithfullyJennyBear]

This is such a good poem, you answer your questions, I love the structure,
Great write :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Many good questions in this poem. Few people will care and worry for you. There are many reasons for this. We open our self up to few people in a lifetime. Today no-one know what I need and want. I believe we need to be kind and not wound people. Maybe if we are lucky. We won't died alone. The ending asked good questions. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Great job.