The Letter pt2

The Letter pt2

A Poem by FallenHeroXx
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I know that this hurts.. 
You’re hurt..
I’m hurt..
We shouldn’t be..
We are good for each other..
You know that right? 
Merely puppets in servitude of each other..
You’re My Fallen Heroine
Following you is like a religion to me..
All of the pain you have is unnecessary..
Love is what you give..
Lost beyond your own sight..
Everything you give me..
Nothing is better than you..
Hero? nope I’m no hero, I’m that voice screaming in the back of everyone’s head..
Everyone is against us..
Right?
Overexcited in my dreams..
I can’t hold you when you’re not here..
Nothing is better than you..
Every time you breathe..
I love you..
A Fallen Hero - The Letter pt2
Dedication - A Fallen Heroine

© 2011 FallenHeroXx


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The hardest thing to control and understand is love. My only advice I give is. Nothing good to say. Say nothing. Words in voice or on a sheet of paper can burn the heart and mind forever. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love any poem about "rough love"... they just show an emotion that incapable of other pieces. Great job; keep it up. I love the line "Merely puppets in servitude of each other"... so deep!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A poem dedication.. thanks babe..
Yeah, most people are against us, yet we'll stay strong!
I really like this piece..

I love you too

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like this one. especially the end. a sweet dedication to a loved one

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 27, 2011
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